One assignment for this class was to make a list of smells and what they remind you of. I listed such things as chocolate, baby lotion, coffee, etc. The final step was to choose one and answer a series of questions based on senses. Without intending to, I ended up writing a little sensory poem inspired by my mom, and I wanted to share it with her, and you, this Mother's Day weekend. Here you go, Mom:
CAPTURED
MOMENT
I smell coffee brewing in the kitchen.
It brings
back memories of my mom, the ultimate coffee drinker, something that
I never have been.
Whenever she visits or when I go home, I wake up to that smell.
Whenever she visits or when I go home, I wake up to that smell.
I sense her presence. Her motherly ways. Her strength as she begins a new day.
I taste something burnt. Something scalding. Something bittersweet.
I know that my mom is in the house. That she is beginning a new day. That I am safe. That I am loved.
I hear my mom’s feet padding down the
hallway, the pouring of coffee into a mug, the quiet morning waking up.
I see the sky beginning to lighten, my mom
in her nightgown.
Happy Mother's Day to my mom--Juliet's grandma, my traveling companion, my roommate, my go-to person, my confidant, my friend . . . my reason to believe!
Ahh! I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! What a beautiful poem and a wonderful friend/mom you have.
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what a beautiful tribute to your mom!
ReplyDeletethis is too cute. your "captured moments" ... love this. you are a great writer. got me teary-eyed for sure.
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